From fdd02f8f6c5b19315457d0660cf0dc79cec72bbe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Paul J. Davis" <paul.joseph.davis@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 8 Mar 2010 20:38:39 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Minor grammar fixes.

---
 doc/htdocs/news.html | 14 +++++++-------
 doc/site/news.rst    | 14 +++++++-------
 2 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/htdocs/news.html b/doc/htdocs/news.html
index ff8449ca..9c164974 100644
--- a/doc/htdocs/news.html
+++ b/doc/htdocs/news.html
@@ -52,8 +52,8 @@
 <div class="section" id="id1">
 <h1>0.6.4 / 2010-03-08</h1>
 <ul class="simple">
-<li>Use cStringIO when it's possible (use less CPU and faster)</li>
-<li>Fix worker freeze when a remote connexion close unexpectedly.</li>
+<li>Use cStringIO for performance when possible.</li>
+<li>Fix worker freeze when a remote connection closes unexpectedly.</li>
 </ul>
 </div>
 <div class="section" id="id2">
@@ -67,10 +67,10 @@
 <h1>0.6.2 / 2010-03-01</h1>
 <ul class="simple">
 <li>Added support for chunked response.</li>
-<li>Added possibility to configure proc_name in config file.</li>
-<li>Improved HTTP parser. We now use buffers instead of strings to store temporary data.</li>
-<li>Improved performance in send.</li>
-<li>Workers are now murdered by age (the older is killed the first).</li>
+<li>Added proc_name option to the config file.</li>
+<li>Improved the HTTP parser. It now uses buffers instead of strings to store temporary data.</li>
+<li>Improved performance when sending responses.</li>
+<li>Workers are now murdered by age (the oldest is killed first).</li>
 </ul>
 </div>
 <div class="section" id="id4">
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
 <h1>0.6 / 2010-02-22</h1>
 <ul class="simple">
 <li>Added setproctitle</li>
-<li>Change privilege switch behaviour. We now works like NGINX, master keep the permission, new uid/gid permissions are only set to the workers.</li>
+<li>Change privilege switch behaviour. We now work like NGINX, master keeps the permissions, new uid/gid permissions are only set for workers.</li>
 </ul>
 </div>
 <div class="section" id="id6">
diff --git a/doc/site/news.rst b/doc/site/news.rst
index 474662c9..a5530f18 100644
--- a/doc/site/news.rst
+++ b/doc/site/news.rst
@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@ News
 0.6.4 / 2010-03-08
 ------------------
 
-- Use cStringIO when it's possible (use less CPU and faster)
-- Fix worker freeze when a remote connexion close unexpectedly.
+- Use cStringIO for performance when possible.
+- Fix worker freeze when a remote connection closes unexpectedly.
 
 0.6.3 / 2010-03-07
 ------------------
@@ -20,10 +20,10 @@ News
 ------------------
 
 * Added support for chunked response.
-* Added possibility to configure proc_name in config file.
-* Improved HTTP parser. We now use buffers instead of strings to store temporary data.
-* Improved performance in send.
-* Workers are now murdered by age (the older is killed the first).
+* Added proc_name option to the config file.
+* Improved the HTTP parser. It now uses buffers instead of strings to store temporary data.
+* Improved performance when sending responses.
+* Workers are now murdered by age (the oldest is killed first).
 
 
 0.6.1 / 2010-02-24
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ News
 ------------------
 
 * Added setproctitle
-* Change privilege switch behaviour. We now works like NGINX, master keep the permission, new uid/gid permissions are only set to the workers.
+* Change privilege switch behaviour. We now work like NGINX, master keeps the permissions, new uid/gid permissions are only set for workers.
 
 0.5.1 / 2010-02-22
 ------------------